the Review
 
  Number 36, Fall 2009
       
 

issue36

 
Editorial Comment Highlights
 
Over 700 entries arrived at our doorstep this year, which means the word is getting out. We believe the best writers find the best contests. Writers want value for their money, too. Every poem and story submitted to The Claremont Review Annual Writing Contest is read by an editor. The editors choose the top fifty poems and twenty stories of the bunch and send them off to our poetry and fiction judges. Once the winners are chosen, we return to the top poetry and fiction folders and pick our favourites to be published inthe fall issue. Issue thirty-six brings young writers together from Fort St. John, BC, to Naples, Florida, who share one trait--- excellence.

For those writers who have not yet been published, please do not be discouraged. Our poetry winner said that she has entered the contest for three years. Imagine if she had given up! By reading the judges' comments in this issue, you will know the qualities in the writing they value. Poets love language, sound, surprise. Fiction writers want to fall into a fictional dream without any interruptions. Don't let grammatical errors, tiresome dialogue, or undeveloped characters doubt your sincerity. Stories involve craft. They demand scenes and drama. The stories that did not make the second round had no dialogue, no character development, no plot and not attention to language. They resembled diary entries or journals, both viable genres, but not what we look for when we read literary fiction.


 

Next week I am moving away, but tonight / we are two paper cranes / folded into a wooden swing


Things We Lost , by Laura Cok

       
Table of Contents
 
cover art: Trees by Kayleigh Ratz
poetry
 

Tina Hanae Miller

Beached
Krista Oehlke

Tortilla Moon

Dessanka Beslic Nicaragua
Kelsey Harbord Confirmation
Tomas Gustafson Upper Middle Class
Andrew Ridker On Pickup Tricks
Sarah Marx Another Type of Granny (for Julia)
Michael Skinnider lemons sound like Stravinsky
Sarah Andersen Rhetorical Question
Tomas Gustafson Eleven Ways of Coffee
Jaimie Beveridge An Assumed Pantoum
Sarah Marx My First Chord
Stephen Stack Looking for Truth in All the Wrong Goldfish
Mark Jiang Monkey King
Emily Garland The Coin
Brendan O'Brien An Alphabet of Birds
  Daydream
Krista Oehlke I Want a Broken Arm Wrapped in a Blue Cast
Riordan Forsyth Sault Ste. Marie in August
Jaimie Beveridge Grandmother, Mother, Me
Rachel Orfani Iranian Football
  Rabbit-Proof Fence
Catriona Christison The Last Time I came For a Visit
  (Without Being Asked)
  My Worm Saviour Archimedes
Tomas Gustafson The Fifth Horseman
  Overpopulation
Tobias Atkin Moon
  A Morning
Lexi McColl Respite
Keely Lewis On the Porch at My Grandmother's House With You
Tanya Kirnishni Grass stains on teh road
Laura Nelles The Morning I Died
  Hummingbird Migration
  Like a Love Story
Lyssa Hogg Kingston Bride
Shawna Dash Dad's New Girlfriend
Alana Cook Alive
Ayase Kay The Oyster
Tamara Finnigan Drag Markers
Misha Kydd To the painter of the blue nightmare mosaic
Kezia Gledhill England
Claire MacKay Middle Ground
Nicki Grewal Love Under the Foodball Helmet
  The Veil of Kabul
Isabelle Fenn Imaginary Playground
Joey Lubitz Up to Stars
Lauren Morley The Nude-In
Allison Tufnail What Do You Remember?
Brianne Fellows A Second Cross
Kelsey Harbord Dear Streetlight
  The Last Elephant Hanged int eh State of Tennessee
Vicky Yang Mid-Autumn Eve
   
Fiction  
Joel Nason Silent
Carolyn Rapanos Impressionism
Elizabeth Comuzzi Up and Down
Robert Pierrard Emergence Labeled Autistic
Jillian Aalhus Petunias Across Your Face
Chelsea Leadbetter Tell Me I Want to Know
Kristina Knappet You War Your Heart on Your Sleeve
  While I Do Not Have One
Med Eden Eighteen Years in a Suitcase
Nicole Jerick Maps
Ian McGee Compass Needle Eyes
Morgaine Blackthorn Up In Smoke
Emily Garland Monologue of Silent Hear
   
visual arts  
Monique Comeau Caught in the Rhythm
Margo Milton Droplet
Courtenay Bolton Repeating
Kayleigh Ratz The Vortex
  January Leaving
   
miscellaneous  
  Poetry Judges' Comments
  Fiction Judges' Comments
  Contributors's Notes